One day we were going to go off-roading. It was me, my cousins, my mom, and uncles. Me and my cousin wanted to go up a hill and ride our bikes down, we went down two times until we went down for the third time and then there was a hole in the hill and my bike flipped and I fell on my knee and elbow and my knee was bleeding and I think I even saw a bone. And that’s the story of the bike incident.
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